I am a good listener and a kind person
I wonder about the oceans and sea life
I hear the breeze blowing through leaves
I see a sea turtle swimming
I want to dive deeper
I am a good listener and a kind person
I pretend to dance
I feel intrigued
I touch a sea dragon
I worry about the future
I cry when my friends do as well
I am an explorer of things
I understand how the earth turns
I say we are all connected
I dream of more travels
I hope to succeed
I am an explorer of things
Eager
Melodic
Inquisitive
Late
Young
Wondering
Earthy
Literate
Laughable
Spiffy
annabruton said,
September 9, 2009 at 2:40 pm
I really enjoyed your poems! I love the ocean! It’s cool to see how alike this class is.
bm70124 said,
September 9, 2009 at 2:55 pm
Hey, your poems were great. I enjoyed reading them. I love turtles, I have a collection of them at home :O) ! Great job!
taylorkn said,
September 9, 2009 at 10:59 pm
I really liked the repetition you had in your acrostic poem. Where would like to travel to? Good descriptive words for your portrait poem!
justinemjones said,
September 13, 2009 at 12:24 pm
Emily, I love the setting you chose for your blog, its really pretty. speaking of pretty your poems were great. I like how you chose “spify” for your ‘s’!
kd78636 said,
September 13, 2009 at 1:14 pm
Great poem!!!! i also dream of more travels, i want to go somewhere so badly! really enjoyed reading!
td74806 said,
September 14, 2009 at 11:44 am
I’m not a big fan of the ocean, but my older sister is. She is a marine biologist, and like you, she loves the ocean and is very curious about marine life.